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“Do you know, I have one rule I have always lived by and shall do for all my life. Always aim for fun, adventure and freedom or as I like to put it, Forget all walls, for you are alive.”
Unfortunately walls are my exact problem, locked away in this ghastly prison! “Why the reinforced steel bars and walls just for one small girl!” I protest to the near, unshaven, disgruntled looking male guard with a either a disregard for deodorant or a very horrid taste in after shave. “Maybe because ma'am, your smile is slier than the fox's and you kick like a mule,” jokes John, oh? I haven't introduced him yet? Hes my young, handsome assistant, John Smith.
Hes an smooth, charming man with with the sharpest brain I could find when rushing off to the airport to start an adventure. We met when I was bobbing and weaving though the crowds at Heathrow faultless until, I wham into John. He catches me in is arms and says “Where you rushing off to so fast, cutting it close are we?”his remark rubbed me the wrong way,I looked him straight in the eye and stated “I'm off on an adventure if you must know,” then I smirked at him and spoke the word of fate “want to come? I'm looking for an attractive assistant right now, all adventuress' need one of those you see.” He accepted, my flabbergasted expression laughed at we both quickly made our way to the flight we would now be sharing with no luggage going god knows where.
“Now we've ended up here, in this dismal hell-hole,”an accusatory glance shot fired at me from John's direction as he voices exactly what I'm thinking “how, perchance, do you suggest we get our self's out of this grand mess ma'am?” tacking the ma'am at the end so to not sound to rude he sighs and stares impatiently at my back.
Commentary for The Adventuress:
John Smith and Bonnie Hive, I love as the first english and maybe the most globe trotting couple I've ever created, They're so much fun! Thats how I shall carry on the series! anyways, hope you liked it, theres more to come I always keep this story open on my computer whenever I just may want too add a paragraph or two and I've already typed a little extra, please leave a comment I like to hear opinions good or bad, Thank you!
hey, he bought milk what more have I got?
I'm the female character here (I am female) this did happen, I know my main character (my partner)in here very well so I just guessed what he was thinking and wrote it down, hey I LOVE guesses I'm a meteorologist the only science that isn't an exact science(NOT!).
It was a normal day, like any other. The sakura were blooming and I was walking to school going to my 4th floor homeroom with my teacher, friends and class mates.
It would be like another day, but then......
Chapter 1 the fourth floor?!?!
"Heeyyy~ Asuka did ya' know," asks Kono eagerly.
"Yeah yeah!" shouts Shika.
"Do you know?" adds Gero as eagerly as the others.
"What are you talking about?" finally asks Asuka
"A-a-a-a transfer student!" shouts Kono, Shika and Gero
"Oh?" says Asu blankly "just that?"
"Just that, no no no no no no no. what if It’s a beautiful bishie with pure, white skin," dreams Shika
"How about a lovely smokin' hot chick with breasts the size of melons!" dreams Kono
"Or a cute, femmine girl with big, blue eyes and blonde hair spun from gold!" dreams Gero
"sit down everyone!" orders the teacher "We have a new transfer student a miss, erm Ennia Fan, miss fan erm could you come inside...miss fan?"
The voice of the teacher faded away and a gush of wind blew in carrying sakura in its wake. Time seemed to stop for me as I noticed a girl among the petals of sakura. Long, shiny, golden hair flowed like ribbons behind her. A spiky, silver, messy, head of hair frames her face. Wait a second; is that the school uniform and she’s jumping?! time speeds up she lands next to my teacher, and simply says "Hello, I'm Ennia Fan, just call me Nia! hope we get along!" the world come crashing back voices erupt from my classmates a roar of excitement erupts around me, I just sit and stare at this amazing new thing with a innocent smile on her face clear fair skin a sweet giggle on her red lips and shockingly bright green eyes framed by delicate dark black lashes. I wonder what will happen next.. Wait a second this is the fourth floor!!!?!?!?!?!!?!??!!.
To be continued . . .
It was a normal day, like any other. The sakura were blooming and I was walking to school going to my 4th floor homeroom with my teacher, friends and class mates.
It would be like another day, but then......
Chapter 1 the fourth floor?!?!
"Heeyyy~ Asuka did ya' know," asks Kono eagerly.
"Yeah yeah!" shouts Shika.
"Do you know?" adds Gero as eagerly as the others.
"What are you talking about?" finally asks Asuka
"A-a-a-a transfer student!" shouts Kono, Shika and Gero
"Oh?" says Asu blankly "just that?"
"Just that, no no no no no no no. what if It’s a beautiful bishie with pure, white skin," dreams Shika
"How about a lovely smokin' hot chick with breasts the size of melons!" dreams Kono
"Or a cute, femmine girl with big, blue eyes and blonde hair spun from gold!" dreams Gero
"sit down everyone!" orders the teacher "We have a new transfer student a miss, erm Ennia Fan, miss fan erm could you come inside...miss fan?"
The voice of the teacher faded away and a gush of wind blew in carrying sakura in its wake. Time seemed to stop for me as I noticed a girl among the petals of sakura. Long, shiny, golden hair flowed like ribbons behind her. A spiky, silver, messy, head of hair frames her face. Wait a second; is that the school uniform and she’s jumping?! time speeds up she lands next to my teacher, and simply says "Hello, I'm Ennia Fan, just call me Nia! hope we get along!" the world come crashing back voices erupt from my classmates a roar of excitement erupts around me, I just sit and stare at this amazing new thing with a innocent smile on her face clear fair skin a sweet giggle on her red lips and shockingly bright green eyes framed by delicate dark black lashes. I wonder what will happen next.. Wait a second this is the fourth floor!!!?!?!?!?!!?!??!!.
To be continued . . .
It was a normal day, like any other. The sakura were blooming and I was walking to school going to my 4th floor homeroom with my teacher, friends and class mates.
It would be like another day, but then......
Chapter 1 the fourth floor?!?!
"Heeyyy~ Asuka did ya' know," asks Kono eagerly.
"Yeah yeah!" shouts Shika.
"Do you know?" adds Gero as eagerly as the others.
"What are you talking about?" finally asks Asuka
"A-a-a-a transfer student!" shouts Kono, Shika and Gero
"Oh?" says Asu blankly "just that?"
"Just that, no no no no no no no. what if It’s a beautiful bishie with pure, white skin," dreams Shika
"How about a lovely smokin' hot chick with breasts the size of melons!" dreams Kono
"Or a cute, femmine girl with big, blue eyes and blonde hair spun from gold!" dreams Gero
"sit down everyone!" orders the teacher "We have a new transfer student a miss, erm Ennia Fan, miss fan erm could you come inside...miss fan?"
The voice of the teacher faded away and a gush of wind blew in carrying sakura in its wake. Time seemed to stop for me as I noticed a girl among the petals of sakura. Long, shiny, golden hair flowed like ribbons behind her. A spiky, silver, messy, head of hair frames her face. Wait a second; is that the school uniform and she’s jumping?! time speeds up she lands next to my teacher, and simply says "Hello, I'm Ennia Fan, just call me Nia! hope we get along!" the world come crashing back voices erupt from my classmates a roar of excitement erupts around me, I just sit and stare at this amazing new thing with a innocent smile on her face clear fair skin a sweet giggle on her red lips and shockingly bright green eyes framed by delicate dark black lashes. I wonder what will happen next.. Wait a second this is the fourth floor!!!?!?!?!?!!?!??!!.
To be continued . . .
It was a normal day, like any other. The sakura were blooming and I was walking to school going to my 4th floor homeroom with my teacher, friends and class mates.
It would be like another day, but then......
Chapter 1 the fourth floor?!?!
"Heeyyy~ Asuka did ya' know," asks Kono eagerly.
"Yeah yeah!" shouts Shika.
"Do you know?" adds Gero as eagerly as the others.
"What are you talking about?" finally asks Asuka
"A-a-a-a transfer student!" shouts Kono, Shika and Gero
"Oh?" says Asu blankly "just that?"
"Just that, no no no no no no no. what if It’s a beautiful bishie with pure, white skin," dreams Shika
"How about a lovely smokin' hot chick with breasts the size of melons!" dreams Kono
"Or a cute, femmine girl with big, blue eyes and blonde hair spun from gold!" dreams Gero
"sit down everyone!" orders the teacher "We have a new transfer student a miss, erm Ennia Fan, miss fan erm could you come inside...miss fan?"
The voice of the teacher faded away and a gush of wind blew in carrying sakura in its wake. Time seemed to stop for me as I noticed a girl among the petals of sakura. Long, shiny, golden hair flowed like ribbons behind her. A spiky, silver, messy, head of hair frames her face. Wait a second; is that the school uniform and she’s jumping?! time speeds up she lands next to my teacher, and simply says "Hello, I'm Ennia Fan, just call me Nia! hope we get along!" the world come crashing back voices erupt from my classmates a roar of excitement erupts around me, I just sit and stare at this amazing new thing with a innocent smile on her face clear fair skin a sweet giggle on her red lips and shockingly bright green eyes framed by delicate dark black lashes. I wonder what will happen next.. Wait a second this is the fourth floor!!!?!?!?!?!!?!??!!.
To be continued . . .
It was a normal day, like any other. The sakura were blooming and I was walking to school going to my 4th floor homeroom with my teacher, friends and class mates.
It would be like another day, but then......
Chapter 1 the fourth floor?!?!
"Heeyyy~ Asuka did ya' know," asks Kono eagerly.
"Yeah yeah!" shouts Shika.
"Do you know?" adds Gero as eagerly as the others.
"What are you talking about?" finally asks Asuka
"A-a-a-a transfer student!" shouts Kono, Shika and Gero
"Oh?" says Asu blankly "just that?"
"Just that, no no no no no no no. what if It’s a beautiful bishie with pure, white skin," dreams Shika
"How about a lovely smokin' hot chick with breasts the size of melons!" dreams Kono
"Or a cute, femmine girl with big, blue eyes and blonde hair spun from gold!" dreams Gero
"sit down everyone!" orders the teacher "We have a new transfer student a miss, erm Ennia Fan, miss fan erm could you come inside...miss fan?"
The voice of the teacher faded away and a gush of wind blew in carrying sakura in its wake. Time seemed to stop for me as I noticed a girl among the petals of sakura. Long, shiny, golden hair flowed like ribbons behind her. A spiky, silver, messy, head of hair frames her face. Wait a second; is that the school uniform and she’s jumping?! time speeds up she lands next to my teacher, and simply says "Hello, I'm Ennia Fan, just call me Nia! hope we get along!" the world come crashing back voices erupt from my classmates a roar of excitement erupts around me, I just sit and stare at this amazing new thing with a innocent smile on her face clear fair skin a sweet giggle on her red lips and shockingly bright green eyes framed by delicate dark black lashes. I wonder what will happen next.. Wait a second this is the fourth floor!!!?!?!?!?!!?!??!!.
To be continued . . .
Chapter 1
Who is it, the one who occupies my dreams, Lives in my life, that is the person of the withered sword the shield that writhes. I am the one who wields the swords made from shackles and the shield of fate what will become of this mystery of ice a ruler only in the wind, those chilling eyes. Yes they are the stuff of nightmares a day incomplete. I am the double sword-wielding daemon they, a spirit with no meaning, a ghost without a past, the lost one, Immune from time. Who is this person who hunts my thoughts, but is that really me standing next to them?
“Ah! Light!” Sumbae awakens from her restless sleep “Who was that really? The dreams are getting more vivid I but the figure I’m still in the dark about.”
“Wake up!” shouts her mother from downstairs “breakfast is ready!”
“Okay!” yells Sumbae downstairs “I’ll be down in a minute!”
“What!” yells her mother back with a heavy drawl.
“Well thinks Sumbae she can’t talk normally for long but at least it’s a little,” Sumbae repeats herself and shouts back “I’ll be down in a minute!”
“Wat?!”
“I’ll be down in a minute!” Sumbae gets her clothes on,
“Pardon?”
“I’ll be down in a minute!” she bushes her hair, runs downstairs
“What!” shouts her mother,
“No need to shout I’m standing right in front of you,”
“what were you saying dear?”
“Nothing, It doesn’t matter,” Sumbae says in flatly.
“I’m going now!” shouts Sumbae as she leaves the house
“goo-,” Click goes the door “Oh, goodbye have a nice day,” Sumbae’s mother whispers to herself melancholy.
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Fire and Ice
In the dream my dream I am ice, they are fire back to back on a never ending battlefield.
I feel pain, like a sword being pulled from my chest, It’s almost real. I feel cold enveloping my whole body, and embracing it. My blood runs cold fire is jeering at me from behind my hazy vision a person enveloped in fire stands before me. “I am glad,” I hear myself say “your eyes have the fire back in them.”
I hear back “your eyes are cold.” I do not know what happens next, before the fire flickers away so I can see who it is standing before me, I wake.
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A normal morning, a normal new term, the same hypnotic dream “Really,” sighs Sumbae.
“Sumbae! Sumbae Ol’ batty Sue! Oi!” the girls voice, belonging to Edna ricochets around the bare, cold and to be honest almost dead bushes of the courtyard, “guess what!”
“Mr Davies was eaten by lions on his safari trip this summer!”
“What, really?… that would be good, Wait no! something bigger!”
“Bigger? so more exciting than Mr Davies being ripped up by lions?!”
“no….YES I mean, …there’s a new student!”
“Hah? Edna, is that really worth passing off Mr Davies being ripped apart by lions?”
“But!” started Edna
“Oohhh a ‘but’,” thought Sumbae
“He’s a foreigner and rumour says that he’s really hot, like, eeekkks!”
“ah so its just Edna’s ever-present man-lust ever since she turned 13 last year she’s become ever-increasingly infatuated with guys,” moans Sumbae to herself. “It just some rumours right? I don’t really much care,” emotionlessly said Sumbae “AT ALL!” she angrily adds in her mind(rather emotionally).
“okay, okay I got it you don’t care ‘much’,”
“Excuse me?” asked a disturbingly familiar voice.
“Yes?” answered Sumbae quickly, turning toward the strange boy addressing her
“I was wondering where the faculty office is?” A confused looking boy (well, more of a man) with shaggy dark blonde hair, pale skin and a rather odd fearsomely handsome face, not feeling any flash of familiarity this time Sumbae continued, unruffled by the sudden appearance of such a beautiful face.
“ Walk straight into the main building and look right you ought to see the sign.”
“Thank you,” he says sincerely then all of a sudden he turns around looks Sumbae in the eyes and smiles.
“His eyes,” Sumbae thinks “they look like they’re hollow, like mine.”
This thought rocketed though the numbness of her thoughts and blew away the normality, rudely shaking up Sumbae’s life. All of a sudden just before Sumbae went to sleep she remembered a phrase she used to always say “this isn’t gonna last long,” and fell, again into her hazy dream of elegant destruction, and intermittent pain.
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Chapter 1
Who is it, the one who occupies my dreams, Lives in my life, that is the person of the withered sword the shield that writhes. I am the one who wields the swords made from shackles and the shield of fate what will become of this mystery of ice a ruler only in the wind, those chilling eyes. Yes they are the stuff of nightmares a day incomplete. I am the double sword-wielding daemon they, a spirit with no meaning, a ghost without a past, the lost one, Immune from time. Who is this person who hunts my thoughts, but is that really me standing next to them?
“Ah! Light!” Sumbae awakens from her restless sleep “Who was that really? The dreams are getting more vivid I but the figure I’m still in the dark about.”
“Wake up!” shouts her mother from downstairs “breakfast is ready!”
“Okay!” yells Sumbae downstairs “I’ll be down in a minute!”
“What!” yells her mother back with a heavy drawl.
“Well thinks Sumbae she can’t talk normally for long but at least it’s a little,” Sumbae repeats herself and shouts back “I’ll be down in a minute!”
“Wat?!”
“I’ll be down in a minute!” Sumbae gets her clothes on,
“Pardon?”
“I’ll be down in a minute!” she bushes her hair, runs downstairs
“What!” shouts her mother,
“No need to shout I’m standing right in front of you,”
“what were you saying dear?”
“Nothing, It doesn’t matter,” Sumbae says in flatly.
“I’m going now!” shouts Sumbae as she leaves the house
“goo-,” Click goes the door “Oh, goodbye have a nice day,” Sumbae’s mother whispers to herself melancholy.
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Fire and Ice
In the dream my dream I am ice, they are fire back to back on a never ending battlefield.
I feel pain, like a sword being pulled from my chest, It’s almost real. I feel cold enveloping my whole body, and embracing it. My blood runs cold fire is jeering at me from behind my hazy vision a person enveloped in fire stands before me. “I am glad,” I hear myself say “your eyes have the fire back in them.”
I hear back “your eyes are cold.” I do not know what happens next, before the fire flickers away so I can see who it is standing before me, I wake.
I wrote this in my diary and when writing it up on here had the thought that maybe, this man isnt unmade at all, that he has more than some of us could ever dream of having...
painful, but somehow shollow enough to not weep over...
one last thing for clarification tahoe is a rich guy, kitsugi is well, normal (as he can be knowing mitsune) and they are both in a love-hate relateonship with mitsune. This is set in a class room witch is empty- in case I dont mention that. ARIGATO~
ha,the end comment is a bit random, but if you think more deeply about it then it gets really nice<3
......... please like this I like the end myself you feel a strange lift, or a shiver not down your spine, but up.