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I don't know if this completely makes sense, I only read it through once and briefly after I wrote it. So if it doesn't make sense please tell if I have made a mistake or not all of it adds up.

This is story I had to do for my english GCSE course. It is a fan fiction of the survival horror game Silent Hill.

I have made up a new character and based him/her in Silent Hills foggy and dark realms.

I advise you not to read this unless you understand the games. Or you probably will not get it.

Helpful criticism is wanted. :) Enjoy.

Well I started on this piece a good month or two back and left it unfinished. Then rediscovered it today. So I decided to attempt to finish it.

Originally it was meant to be a story, but basically ended up as a confusing conception of 'reality' I have.

You can tell this was written in two chunks because it has two very different styles in it. The first I am basically just describing a British summers day, in which I was feeling quite blissful and deep, you can see this by the huge (maybe too much) amount of description I put in to the first 11 lines.

Then you come to the second part which I wrote today 23/9/2008. Which is more of me describing the state of mind I am trying to portray in this little 'piece'.

Well now that you have gotten the basic jist of this 'piece'. I'd like to tell me what you think of it and how I can improve it.

Thanks :3

I have noticed I have a few peices about losing your mind. So here is a series for you. These are a series of pieces I have written about insanity or going insane.

IF1 Piece, no commentary.

IF1 Piece, no commentary.