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razzle_bedazzlez

Marriage

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Wed, 1 Aug 2007 at 05:56pm

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"I do." Love you. "I do." Want a family. "I do." Hold you dearest. "I do." Kiss you softly. "I do." Pick some fights. "I do." Make you cry sometimes. "I do." Say things I shouldn't. "I do." Feel like a moron. "I do." Try to make it up to you. "I do." Make things worse. "I do." Sign the divorce papers unwillingly. "I do." Tell the kids I still love you because "I do." Miss your heart beating. "I do." Miss your touch. "I do." Hope you feel the same. "I do." Love you still. "I do." Move my things back in. "I do." Look you in the eyes. "I do." Say I'm sorry. "I do." Know you know I mean it. "I do." Love you. And I'd do anything for you.
Three others like this.
2007-08-01
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 3 plus votes, and 0 astars.
inthecafeteria
2007-08-01

That's kinda sweet. As I read through it, I was beginning to get the impression that it was gonna have a severely depressing ending, but I was pleasantly surprised.

There are some things that can be repaired. Perhaps not good as new, but maybe just good enough.

plus one

ironypills
2007-08-02
I enjoyed this. Sweet sums it up pretty well.
emilyexstacy
2007-08-03
I think it's wonderfully touching. Not something I personally relate to, but I like it. +1
razzle_bedazzlez
2007-11-04
your comment was poetry, ITC.