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Mon, 2 Apr 2007 at 11:20pm

Moonlit

When we were orphans we swam in a brook, bubble, babble; roil. One midnight we swam, you, me, and the current, sweeping our feet from under us. Cracks formed in the orphanage walls we watched; naked but clothed in water, shaded by moonlight, mesmerized by those walls, breaking and solid. We ate an egg each the next day, I gave you half of mine; the swim exhausted you. I said I had dreams after the water had risen from my skin; I clutched you while we swam, hands sliding over you but not touching. That was the rule the orphanage had given us. But I felt skin, dulcet, moist, it would have been delicate, if not for the orphan crammed within. We were still orphans, but we were soothed. We rose with the next day’s sun as two orphans at midnight, swimming.
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2007-04-02
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i don't know which one was prettier, this one or Peak.
Oh Scruff that's beautiful. :) +1