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Thu, 25 Dec 2008 at 04:42am

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"Thought upon thought upon thought upon thought upon Flesh upon bone upon bone becomes flesh Whats within without and around reflects and I can see it back through a sunflare" --Golden_orchids Thought upon thought upon thought upon thought upon things wrought of nought upon things naught of this I hear calling across over seas never resting like telephone voices distorted by static say Flesh upon bone upon bone becomes flesh of my eyes travel back in my head to my neurons where thoughts never resting and wrestling between the two states that I'm neither the best nor the other so Reconcile both to the falling beneath of my mind to the depths where tranquillity truces let pupils stare outwards into the dark eyelids and whats within without and around reflects on the Clarity seeping through ev'ry synapse putting me on dry land in the hardest of boots so that everything's solid and keeping me heavy when... ...and I can see it back through a sunflare.
Three others like this.
golden_orchids
2008-12-25
Awh Smiler you mad thing- this has totally blitzed the original piece man :P I wish I knew about them metery-things betterer ^-^ Happy Xmoose y'all
bowers
2008-12-25
ahhh man i love this, the meter is just fantastic :) I love secret santa on IF :)
aetherlightning
2008-12-26

Yeah i really like this... awesome use of meter... something that I could never pull off well... Jolly Good Show