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Who wanted green in her hair.

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Sun, 9 Nov 2008 at 06:51pm

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Black and white or blunt and awful Tug the teal sky, Turn it brighter! Stripped and teased then calm and lawful Scuff your boots and shine, street fighter! Bare and young yet caught, still thoughtful Let us play The game we play. “Lose, lose!” Her lipstick blinds A game you’ve lost, I think you’ll find. Lipstick laughs, a purple line To cake and tack and please your mind. Vain and old and tired, but thoughtful, Pull your waist in, Worn and slighter Try to make our problems yours. Our smiles do jade But yours look tighter.
zigzagtuesday
2008-11-07

i love the rhyme scheme and concept. you really pulled this off. fun to read and you've definitely made a point of mediocrity. makes me think of an old woman and her strained relationship with maybe a lover or family member.