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Tue, 21 Aug 2007 at 09:52am

Cold dead eyes.

Eleven fucking years We lived with that. Fucking heart breaks and burns. Hell can't compare with what he did. After 4 years of calm your going back? Your so fucking ignorant. I can't believe you have already forgotten. You have no right. Think of her. You amaze me on how much you can careless. Through every fucking thing he's done You still love him? How? Why? You want my support you say? FUCK YOU!!!!!! I WILL SUPPORT NOTHING WITH HIM. I FUCKING HOPE HE DIES. He dose this then try's to buy his way. Your so stupid. I'm tempted to leave. Not like you would care. I really hope you wouldn't. Here I stand. I'm not confused by his tricks. Is a simple word enough to make you lose control? Your simple minded is so. Manipulation is his game, your the player. I believe that hes truly gotten to you. If you go back, the cycle wont end. Your like a little kid. Trembling crying his name. How can you do that when hes the reason for your pain? So many questions, so little answers. So answer me one more. When he kills you, what do you want me to tell the cops?
Four others like this.
2007-08-21
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 4 plus votes, and 0 astars.
themilkman
2007-08-21
thats... intense.
bobman12
2007-08-21
Yeah. I got kinda pissed about my mom.
golden_orchids
2007-08-24
Jeeeeez Raw emotion is great fodder for pieces but this is as milky puts it Intense my eyes are burning just from reading it man...
macca
2008-03-23

There's nothing wrong with intense, a slight repetition of swearing here which shows bear anger.. maybe you could make it cut a little deeper to fitin with your "cold dead eyes" title by suggesting a colder, quieter tone.. that would be even more scary/angry :)

katastrophe
2008-07-29
thats intense. but very good[: