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Wed, 17 Sep 2008 at 01:13am

I love you, stupid

Hush for now. Please, you need to understand. Listen. I love you. Something that I hadn't planned Perhaps this surprises you, maybe it won't I love you, stupid. Even though you don't. Stop beating around bushes, questioning Motives, and listen. Is this more than a fling? I can't just let you run me in circles now, I'll be falling tonight, you just determine how. I'll be you sun, your moon, your stars, your sky You're looking at me and wond'ring why You see, dear lover, our time is short If love is what you ask, abandon your cold fort. You might have been blinded by my once childish games But my time with you established love's flames. The curtain falls anon, you should take a bow. I love you, stupid. Quiet, it is over now.
Five others like this.
2007-10-24
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 4 plus votes, and 0 astars.
mikeec216
2007-10-24
I love it stupid. Also there are some typos, but we all make mistakes. I still love it. +1!!!
2007-10-24
Sweet. And funny. +1
golden_orchids
2007-10-27
Hmmm, I think theres far to much of this soppy stuff going on around this website by half! But this is well written, so I shall give you a vote :)
sold
2007-11-12

"Hmmm, I think theres far to much of this soppy stuff going on around this website by half!"

Agreed?

I need to get back to that zombie series.. but then you never know where soppiness will show up...

burning_sands
2010-04-28

it is soppy but I rather like it because it's got a true feeling to it, whereas a lot of soppy things feel maudlin and over-dramaticized