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bobman12

Sorry I'm busy.

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Sun, 29 Jul 2007 at 12:47am

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I can see you and me, together I mean. So many lies, I can taste them on your lips. Are you so blind to your tricks? I want to beat you with a stick. That's a little over done, but it wouldn't began to cover the things you've made me feel. Your eyes illuminate a still room, yet your words bring gloom to the day. I thought about you today, it made me feel pain. You play your role, "staying true to the game." I hate the way you say please. I couldn't resist if I had a gun to my head. It's the way you make me feel, like two hits of coke. A drug that cant be ignored. So go ahead, confine in your lies. Lose your self in your fantasy. I hope you get far in life. But remember, if you ever need a hand I'm not here. O my, I used your line.
Five others like this.
2007-07-29
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 3 plus votes, and 2 astars.
galanteeshowman
2007-07-29

"I used your line" sounds like it could've been a coke reference, the "drug that can't be ignored". It'd be a very good one at that. I know that's not what this is about, just saying. I like this, though.

bobman12
2007-07-29
Yeah, it was.
poison
2007-08-08
I actually really really like this one. I don't know why. - Matt
social_r3jekt
2007-08-16
This is great. I can't discribe how it makes me feel, but I cant help but keep reading it over and over.
themilkman
2007-08-20
That was great.