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Out In The Wild

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Sat, 21 Jul 2007 at 11:37am

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It was dark and dark and dusky as we stepped out in the wild With our minds raving with madness of a rabid devil child In our pockets were the ruins of the times we did not know And the One with Mother Nature saw the eyes, all in a row See how everything’s a message in the world of walking woods And the grim reaper is smiling ‘cause he sold us tainted goods On our way, the way to nowhere, nowhere fast is where we are And we’ve never been so close to seeing how we got so far Funniest of fears crept in and spread their wings out on our mind Laugh at everything we saw, to consequences we went blind All our senses overdriving, this command does not compute Sense of motion had a meltdown, voice of reason had gone mute On the same track for four hours though it only seemed like three Put me back in jail again please, I should never be so free And the leader of the pack waves but we can’t hear what he shouts Nowhere left to run and hide now when all ins have turned to outs Walking back and forth and back again, surrounded by the fear That so very eerie feeling of “I never should be here!” Each of us had some mind left, just not enough to light the dark So we banged our heads together just to make a little spark There are no words known to mankind to describe how lost we were All the trees that we passed by all seemed so very similar At the speed of raging rockets everything just fades to black Start to count us down to panic now as calmth is all we lack Then from high above the treetops, truth came down, a falling moon Still it was somewhat unclear, a lot like telling late from soon With the brain we improvised along the way, we got it right And we furiously returned from where we came into the night How on earth we did escape the woods unharmed we’ll never know Just remember that November when we found the time to go As far out of all our minds that it dictated me these words Carry that night like a deadly plague for us, the lesser birds
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2007-07-21
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burning_sands
2007-10-17
So we banged our heads together just to make a little spark i think i adore that sentence and the last one too