I think I like the direction some of these newer pieces of yours are taking. Not that I think all your pieces from here on in should continue in this trend [why, that would be PREDICTABLE], but it certainly is a nice feeling I'm getting, particularly from this one.
Bowers pretty much got my feelings on this piece, and expressed them at least as well as I'd be able to manage. The feel of your poems is different than most. While at a glance the pauses seem almost random, in execution that really are rather key to the overall feel of the piece.
I especialy like this one. Right now [RIGHT NOW] I think this is my favorite piece of yours. definitely plussed
The way it's spoken in my head reminds me of Ursula Rucker sings, with all the gaps and such. I like it.
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2007-09-06
Yeah, you're pretty brilliant, Matt. I too love the use of line breaks as punctuation, and the complete unpredictablity. And though it is unpredictable, it doesn't come off as completely random (which would be a bit passe).
I like this becasue it leaves alot of questions to be asked and other questions that are unanswered.
And I think that probably comes from a personal feeeling of not being able to ask questions and having some unanswered
...if you get what I mean :\
anyway, I like it
:]
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I think I like the direction some of these newer pieces of yours are taking. Not that I think all your pieces from here on in should continue in this trend [why, that would be PREDICTABLE], but it certainly is a nice feeling I'm getting, particularly from this one.
Bowers pretty much got my feelings on this piece, and expressed them at least as well as I'd be able to manage. The feel of your poems is different than most. While at a glance the pauses seem almost random, in execution that really are rather key to the overall feel of the piece.
I especialy like this one. Right now [RIGHT NOW] I think this is my favorite piece of yours. definitely plussed
Bowers: Thanks... I think. XD But yah, that's basically how it's supposed to make you feel and yah. :P
inthecafeteria: Glad you like the direction my pieces are taking. :P Also, I'm glad you noticed my use of linebreaks.
- Matt
As per usual I cant add 2 the comments above other than to state this goes really well with what i'm listening 2 right now (the mars volta)
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love you sexy
The way it's spoken in my head reminds me of Ursula Rucker sings, with all the gaps and such. I like it.
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Yeah, you're pretty brilliant, Matt. I too love the use of line breaks as punctuation, and the complete unpredictablity. And though it is unpredictable, it doesn't come off as completely random (which would be a bit passe).
Kluny, by the way.