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Paradise tree

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Wed, 11 Jul 2007 at 10:32pm

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Some people have notice paradise tree was put in some of my poems so I decided to write one just about this miraculous tree.

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Like a stair way to heaven,

The branches beckon me to climb them,

Whispering its stories to me as I run my hand over the carvings,

Some old,

some new,

Some of the most elaborate designs carved in,

Goose bumps go up and down my flesh,

I can't even begin to explain the feeling it gives me,

I have yet to leave my mark,

Waiting for the right moment and time,

I was there the day they attacked my friend.

The electric groan,

as I watched chips fly,

I cried silently.

After they amputated such a beautiful piece of a beautiful tree I ran to the tree climbing as high as I could go.

The ocean breeze,

Oh.... If you could only see it for your self and its miraculous beauty.

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This poem didnt really do it's justice but I'm going to rewrite it when I go and visit it.

Two others like this.
2007-07-11
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bobman12
2007-07-16
Oh, so this is the wonder tree that has graced your writeing huh? +1