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Shoes (oh boy)

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Fri, 29 Jun 2007 at 11:05pm

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Some Girls Favorite topics. Some guys worst enemys. Each shoe has its own personality. How far you've gone, Where you go, What you do, Mine, Once were crisp, stiff, Black converse, With Rigid white laces. Now they lay tired from running down the street, Climbing The paradise tree, Standing on their tiptoes, Running up the stairs. Now, My white limp laces have been retired to my bedside drawer, Treated like an old friend. Replaced by One Neon Green one And One Pink. A day with first graders covers one side with glitter , Place there by sheer boredom. Now, I look at them one At the foot of the bed, one in the bathroom. Limp and in need of and ankle and foot, So they can stand tall and proud. Accompanied by Vibrant Tights or a shaggy jean cuff. At the beach, I feel so bad, While they sit of to the side, While I wallow in the sand. Until the day he joined me, Bringing my converse a new friend.
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2007-06-29
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kluny
2007-06-30
Yeah. Shoes have a lot of poetry in them. +1.
social_r3jekt
2007-06-30
My Friend said I used stiff to much anyone have any seguestions?
inthecafeteria
2007-07-02

I didn't notice that, but a thesaurus would certainly help there. Rigid is generally a good replacement.