Frozen
Fri, 29 Jun 2007 at 08:00pm
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Watching the sun set.
Just me and my friends.
Sitting in Paradise tree.
We get down.
Covering our feet with the sand.
our Converse sitting in a pile.
Each holds their own personality.
I wan't to hold my breath and try not to cry.
Because I don't want to see this wonderful day die.
It's so beautiful it sends chills through my body.
It hurts knowing it will almost be over.
He's Holding my hand.
Shes Got her arm around my shoulders.
swinging our legs.
That are hanging off the moldy, rotted, picnic table.
Shivering and cold.
As the sun rises next door.
We all huddle together waiting for more.
One other likes this.
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2007-06-29
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bobman12
2007-07-02
I noticed paradise tree in a cupple of your pieces. I like your stuff. +1