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poison

From Ophelia to Hamlet

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Fri, 29 Jun 2007 at 04:19pm

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I love it when your eyes pop out when we kiss and you try not to drool but you end up doing so regardless. Your tongue hangs out when you speak and you gnash and grind your teeth such that your speech is quite incoherent. They say you are mad. but I know its because you are madly in love with me.
Three others like this.
2007-06-29
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 3 plus votes, and 0 astars.
golden_orchids
2007-06-29
hahaha I like it sounds like a pretty acurate description of what you feel for me ;)
inthecafeteria
2007-06-30
Goldy, you are gross and stupid. Soft and sweet, and a fun play on personal perspective in writing. You seem to enjoy dark humor. plus one, of course.
poison
2007-06-30

Nah, Golden and I were talking on msn about how I'd love him forever if he read the new poem I posted. XD

Yes, dark humor is fun. :D

- Matt

kluny
2007-06-30

It's pretty good. I promise I wasn't dissing you when I said it wasn't "literary". I just meant that it wouldn't fit in the New Yorker. More like Spin or something, if they took poems.

sold
2007-08-30
This did sound like a dog to me. Or a dinosaur.
bowers
2008-02-15
stop kissing dogs +1 :)