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Deceitful Heart

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Fri, 29 Jun 2007 at 07:51am

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Free meals... From a Trash Can. Full Filling the needs of white Trash men... For a Price. Young Child. Watches his momma. Everything on top of him. No one helps. Slices of knifes. Rips of skin. Momma won't get up again. Daddy cries, Momma Drinks, Little innocent daughter peeks. A knife goes stab, A woman goes scream, Papa wipes him self clean. He tells baby girl not to cry, Momma just had to die. Cold Dinners from the freezer. Thats what her father feeds her. Grandmothers of her Rocker. Girl goes to her room and no one stops her... From opening that bottle, taking a sip Lighting that joint, taking a whiff Taking that knife careful not to slip. Blasting the hateful Mourning sounds of electronic screams. Her body aches as her virginity almost breaks unwillingly, By the boy she loved. To hopped up on drugs, To drunken on Alcohol. Blood D r a i n s From her Veins. Daddy's little girl no more. Mothers not around. Same with Father. They come home beating on each other. Son Watches, Distracts his brothers, So the don't have the same fate as the others. Sister Pants, What brother thought was a boyfriend moans, Hands her the money, and shes all alone. A sob in the middle of the night Is all I hear from my throat. Since my sister Perished and left me for the better. and I've moved on to the beer and the alcoholic parties. Cold and Shaking Alone and Scared. FUCK YOU MOTHER, You were never there. Big Brother doesn't talk. Other sisters and Ignorant Bitch, No help to the family, Fuck that shit. Little brother doesn't understand. Baby sister steals my heart, And I cry, Afraid they'll Take. Her. Away.
Six others like this.
2007-06-29
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 5 plus votes, and 1 astars.
aetherlightning
2007-06-29
confusingly epic, but I liked it for some reason... +1 and Claimed!
bobman12
2007-07-01
Wow. +1.
inthecafeteria
2007-07-02

This is some powerful shit. The content, the phrasing, the overall delivery, all put together in such a way I couldn't help but read it aloud to myself. It gave off the vibe of a kinda spoken word production. I dunno if you've ever heard of him, but you might like a musical artist by the name of Saul Williams. I won't tell you too much about him, but I think he's sorta along the lines of "tremendously great".

Also, I'm thinkin' this could use an A*