I don't really like this one. It was from the beginning of the year when I really didn't much care for poetry. Thus, I don't care all that much for my earlier poems though I did write this pretty interesting poem about hardcore amphibians. Maybe I'll see if I can find that sometime. (Once again, sorry for explaining my poetry. I'll try to stop. XD)
I actually like the structure of this one. The same way minimalistic art makes the viewer imagine a more meaningful picture, minimalistic (and unusually placed) words make the reader imagine a more personal, emotion-invoking image.
If the last line said "ramen-consuming musician", this poem would closely describe my life. +1, as always.
I don't really like this one. It was from the beginning of the year when I really didn't much care for poetry. Thus, I don't care all that much for my earlier poems though I did write this pretty interesting poem about hardcore amphibians. Maybe I'll see if I can find that sometime. (Once again, sorry for explaining my poetry. I'll try to stop. XD)
- Matt
I actually like the structure of this one. The same way minimalistic art makes the viewer imagine a more meaningful picture, minimalistic (and unusually placed) words make the reader imagine a more personal, emotion-invoking image.
If the last line said "ramen-consuming musician", this poem would closely describe my life. +1, as always.
my brother used to yell at me (nicely) for eating ramen ... "you're not a poor starving college student yet!..."
it made it taste better