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deadwatch_dummy

Briseis

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Mon, 11 Jun 2007 at 02:48pm

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Charming I hate poetry but males let me deliver no offense to be tired of frustration not depression or weakness I am uncaring of or so I thought I was I am too tall and my hair is too short her hair is short but an inch or two longer than mine ignoring it won’t make it go away Paul and the others told us that those are glorified are holy are damn Eve and Achilles’ trophies if males are so high they should be better than us and aren’t.
One other likes this.
2007-06-11
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 1 plus votes, and 0 astars.
deadwatch_dummy
2007-06-11
ugh... sorry... >_<
kluny
2007-06-11

No, it's pretty interesting. Not worthy of a +1, I'm afraid, but I'll keep reading your peices. I think you have promise.

golden_orchids
2007-06-12
I like the way you have written this, I hate writing poetry so empathise with you on that score... but yeh I like the kind of staggered scatty feel to it and since I have so many votes I can give +1 for youuuuu Oh and I dont think you show promise- promise is the idea that one day you will be good You show talent- you are good woop