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Ocean

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Sat, 2 Jun 2007 at 04:52pm

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Love is a roaring wave in the ocean of hate. Swallowing your mind and taking away your intellectual freedom without you even realizing.
Nine others like this.
2007-06-02
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 8 plus votes, and 1 astars.
themilkman
2007-06-02
I like, I like. +1
themilkman
2007-06-02
Also, fabulous screen name.
kluny
2007-06-02
Shortnsweet, cheers.
inthecafeteria
2007-06-02

This piece is a very [insert word other than interesting here, but with the same meaning] piece in that it is an altogether clear and poetic metaphor for possibly the most complex of human emotions, all wrapped up into seven short lines. Very eloquently stated, too.

plus one

golden_orchids
2007-06-03
This piece is of a rare variety on this site in that it does not over complicate the issue. Fantastic. +1
Thank you all for the votes and comments, I'm so grateful.
themilkman
2007-06-03
CLAIIIIIIMMMMMEEEDDDDD!
kluny
2007-06-04
Nooo, I claimed him!
themilkman
2007-06-07
LIES