Love Will
Tue, 8 May 2007 at 06:17pm
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Love will hit a perfect stranger,
Show her, hurt her, challenge and change her,
Will throw down all the walls she built,
And free her from her hazy guilt,
Lead her barefoot through a crowd,
And have her scream her heart out loud.
Love will strike and drive her crazy,
Will have her shout, "Please someone save me"
Love will clear up shadowed storms,
And pry away her gilded thorns.
It could leave her in the dust,
At least she knows that she can trust.
Let her bust out of her seams,
And lead her to the things she dreams.
Love will give a set of wings,
Love will make her change some things.
Love picks her some pretty flowers,
And keep her on the phone for hours.
Love will let down heavy guard,
And soften up a stony heart.
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2007-05-08
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golden_orchids
2007-05-09
I like the explosive element to the begining of this poem :)