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Grow Up and Out

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Sun, 14 Sep 2008 at 11:25pm

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Remember when you were young When getting trashed and breaking shit Was your idea of fun? Remember when you swore your life To the music cause it saved you? Because your whole life was spent Hating, untrusting all the people Who betrayed you? Well now you’ve left everything behind To watch the kids you used to be Standing in a show line Walk right by cause you haven’t the time You’re on your own and working Getting paid, no more hurting Take some pills every day To try and make your head okay Look in the mirror, it happens to everyone You know it was good while it lasted But it’s time to grow up and out of the fun Because now you’re basking in the sun With the rest of the world Rebellion doesn’t look good on you any more You traded you studs for society’s duds Your boots are just a memory of days gone by Remember when you said you’d always be crazy Have they programmed you or have you gotten lazy Well they can say whatever they want to me Because it was great when I believed But I’m done with my dreams Trading in a world of lies for this false reality I couldn’t do it anymore This outfit looks better on me It just looks better on me But I know I will always think the same I don’t care what they say Because I know deep inside That I don’t have to be a part of the game To play...
Five others like this.
2007-04-25
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 5 plus votes, and 0 astars.
emilyexstacy
2007-04-25
kgjfklgjnfk g This is amazing! I can't really relate, because I'm only 14, so I'm syill in that phase, but it's such a great idea for wrting about! And, maybe growing up wont be so bad. :] Pluss.

It's true. You DON'T have to be part of the game to play. In fact, you play better when you see it for what it is. +1

Dude, such an awesomely written piece. The flow is spectacular and I adore the "untrusting" line...those little things that make the entirity. And the reluctancy to give in to 'the man' is bloody inspiring. It's said very well with the metaphor of playing a game. The transition is something everyone makes, but it doesn't have to be a body and mind sort of thing, right?

Incredible work, again.

mother-war
2007-04-26

I love this. It fits so well with what I'm afraid is going to happen to me... the redundancy and lifelessness of most adults I see... I always wonder what their lives were like before they got jobs and families, what their lives are like now, and what happened to them.

This encompasses so many things in so many ways. Excellent job.

inthecafeteria
2007-04-26

I see it as the speaker is seeing the world in a new light, realising the pointlessness of his childhoold ways and assuring himself that this new life is better, but at the same time considering that maybe this is only a new lie, what he's living now.

Which, of course, poses the question, what is real living like?

plus one, nevertheless. Great concept. Well-executed.

sold
2007-08-06

I feel like I wrote it. Not to lay claims on it, or say you are imitating me at all, just that I... well... you know. Except for the last stanza.