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Us, Monsters

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Tue, 3 Apr 2007 at 10:35am

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You're like a bad penny, Preaching peace Then pointing a finger. You're like a bad penny, You keep coming back Like the ocean reclaiming rock. "It's for your own good." We've heard better. FUCK YOU. We were here first And we will be here LAST. How? Your guns are bigger? It's not about guns. It's about hope, it's about life. We have none of both. Our NEED to die Is what makes us monsters. Not our beleifs, Not the shade of our skin, You couldn't care less about our way of life. This isn't about morals. This isn't some great tragic misunderstanding We need to die And if we can drag you screaming Into the bowls of hell? We will. You're like a bad penny You keep coming back. As Greeks against Trojans, As Romans, As Vikings, As Colonialists. And now as this. You die, you cry, But you keep coming back. The call for loot is too much for you, Be it gold or black. Has your tendency to wake up, in the morning and look EAST become PART of your genetics, we wonder? You claim that we started it. If we started it, why are you HERE? Here. HERE. Location. Location. Invasion. You're like a bad penny...
Five others like this.
2007-04-03
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 1 minus votes, 5 plus votes, and 0 astars.
aetherlightning
2007-04-03
i like it... especially the 'bowels' of hell line... +1
golden_orchids
2007-04-04
good imagery an shizz :P likin it....
kluny
2007-04-07
*colonialists I need to read this again. Oh well, +1.
YAY! All fixed! Thanks Kluny.
kluny
2007-04-09

On reread, I still like it. :) I think the term "bad penny" should be enteredin the IF dictionary along with "bran" and whatever else is in there.

macca
2008-04-01
I like the imagery in this! you're a very powerful writer +1 :)