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Mum's Apple Pie

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Mon, 26 Mar 2007 at 11:25pm

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Bring chocolate, bring wine Bring baseball bats and swine Bring your children and your lover Bring batteries and duck for cover Bring the song that's in your head Bring the words you wish you said Bring a thing to make me laugh Bring yourself and make it fast Nuclear winter, coming for you Nuclear winter, here's what to do Hide in the basement, tell all your friends We'll sit and watch while the world ends Bring hope and victory Bring love and history Bring the swingset in the yard Bring your life and clamp down hard Bring it, bitch. Nuclear winter...
Ten others like this.
2007-03-26
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 10 plus votes, and 0 astars.
golden_orchids
2007-03-27
I am confuzzled by the relation of the peice to its title :O
inthecafeteria
2007-03-27
I think it's awesome. To the degree of "totally". plus one
kluny
2007-03-27
Well, the title was supposed to be incongruent. Or come up with your own theory.
aetherlightning
2007-03-27

simple and powerful... i like it a lot... +1

and why does the title have to have anything do with the piece?? It's acceptable in music why not in writing??

themilkman
2007-03-30
The mum represents giving. The apple represents produce and sharing. And the pie represents a pie. PLUS 1

I think nuclear winter would effectively END apple pie, wouldn't it? I mean, unless people built huge shelters with UV lamps in order to grow trees underground...

I think nuclear winter would effectively end Moms too, though. :(

kluny
2007-03-31

I think what's happening, is I'm encouraging people to shelter from the fallout in the apple pie, which as everyone knows, is impervious to radiation due to all the love from Mum.

^that's quite a way to think of it. it's very...i dunno, the beginning line made me want to read all of it. plus one

social_r3jekt
2007-06-30

I love how, The title is different than the poem to one person, but to someone else it makes sense with the poem.

macca
2008-03-27

My mum always asks things like that when she doesn't understand a piece of writing or something but I think it is a brilliant piece because I've made the title mean something in my head and it doesn't matter if it's wrong!

Plus one for thsi piece.

macca
2008-03-27
Well done Aimee you spelt "this" wrong
bowers
2008-06-16
holy moly +1