Life
Sun, 18 Mar 2007 at 08:10am
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Life is a book,
Thinkin' everyone can look;
Take you off the shelve and read you'
That is one thing you think they can do.
They give you a title,
Like prep, punk, soon to be American Idol:
The author is unknown,
You feel like everyone is in your zone;
Flippin' through the pages of your life,
Through your happiness and strife;
And when they put you back on the shelf,
Beween magic and elves,
Your life seems to stop
Wishing you weren't on top.
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I like the whole immediate judgment deal of it, I get a lot of that and it really does suck that people just skim you and assume who you are. +1
Milkie pwns me at analysing poetry.
I liked this, but some of the rhyming seemed a bit forced. I've no idea how to help that, I haven't mastered it myself, but yeah..
This is good, i like wt u r saying, accept i kinda judge people without meeing to, dnt like doing it tho
dude, that's my girl! you are an awesome poet! i've known you for like twelve years and you never showed me this??? lol i love it and i give it a plus one!