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neoeno

Butterfly

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Fri, 23 Feb 2007 at 02:36pm

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Ironypills' mission was "You must write a WORD-THING. In exactly 63 words. It has to involve mystery, butterflies, opening doors, and chocolate milk." This is my response.

There was a butterfly near me. I don't like flying things really... I wanted it gone. I attempted blowing it away, but it wouldn't move. I had this chocolate milkshake though.

Some got on its wing, and it fell to the floor, and stuck there. It was really thick... and it couldn't move... but it struggled.

I opened the door and went inside.

Two others like this.
2007-02-23
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 2 plus votes, and 0 astars.
ironypills
2007-02-23
You completed the mission! I am impressed. Now for the second one I mentioned. Heh heh.
golden_orchids
2007-02-24

lol interesting.

The door comment was a leetle random tho lol

Minor criticism of the use of 'it' in the sentance starting "Some got on its wing..." you suggest the milkshake cant move :P

Appart from that *thumbs up*