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A pronoun

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Fri, 29 Dec 2006 at 01:16pm

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It is hard to express my extreme disdain

I feel chagrined, I feel the pain

I can sense a note flowing through my body

Now I'll write about it and sound really emo

But I don't really care, 'cause I'm just really angry

I cannot express what you can understand

I'm a freak in a show and I'm taking no stand

I know what you know and they hold no quarter

And the notes don't flow

The notes don't flow through my veins like the blood I need to survive to think I would just sit here and cry after holding it in for such a long time

I need to kill the thing I love most

I need to purge the perversion

The words don't work

I need something to fix it

But I'm too needy and I'm going to go mad

I'm going to get angry, I refuse to be sad

So the rage fills my veins where the void still cries out

I'm screaming in anger because it looks bad to pout

My cause is to kill

Now I'm in a war

Like one of nikeshlong's pieces

But I'm not doing anything because I'm still sitting here and writing this story

Just for you to eat it

Because no one fully understands the magnitude of what I've sold and what's yet to come

Something died

I didn't know how to help it live

Maybe it's not dead

But it's very tired and it's the only chance

The only chance is tired

THE ONLY CHANCE IS TOO TIRED

GET OUT OF HERE OR I AM GOING TO STAB YOU WITH SOMETHING

I'LL KILL YOU I'LL HIT YOU WITH SOMETHING

I can't exhale!

Fifteen others like this.
2006-12-29
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 2 minus votes, 13 plus votes, and 1 astars.
inthecafeteria
2007-01-02

I really like this piece. Eccentric but mostly out of fear. Of course, I can't say I fully understand, but I really like it.

Plus one.

cyanide
2007-04-04
I especially like the second stanza. It's very powerful.
themilkman
2007-04-08

I didn't like it too much, and I'm one of the two minuses. I didn't really like how it was written and something about it bothered me.

sold
2007-04-09
The timing on this is interesting, considering your recent chattering in the box...
macca
2008-03-27
"I cannot express what you can understand" I think I either understand this line perfectly or I've completely misunderstood it haha But I genuinely do love this piece. I had to read it a few times and I still really like it. +1
bowers
2008-03-28
The amount of anger in this is quite scary. Fantastic. +1