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razzle_bedazzlez

Freedom Soul

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Tue, 12 Dec 2006 at 05:57pm

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How can my soul set free itself When I've tried so hard before Don't appreciate the things we've got So greed makes us want more My Angel wings are featherless And now my soul can't fly My pointed horns are filed down But the devil's passed me by Oh Lord, am I forgotten? Did you purposely freeze my heart? Did you forget about the lands Whose people stand apart? Crooked as our lives may seem The Angel by my side Pulls me up when I fall down And sheilds me when I hide Shaken this world has become The lives are lost in war Our nation's keen to pick a fight That there's no reason for Love can do so many things Whether it be bad or good So many've died of broken hearts That it's misunderstood My soul is caged behind these bars And before it is the key Its hands are cuffed and cannot reach The thing that'll set it free Dark clouds looking ominous Oncoming is the storm All I need to be there with Is you to keep me warm Diseases that can spread so fast Are on a killing spree Oh Lord, heal my Angel wings So my soul can be set free written 12/29/05
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2006-12-12
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puretechieg
2006-12-12

You definitely have a niche. And that's religion. I'm personally not so spiritual, but I like what you do with your writing. Dark but otherworldly. A pat on the back for you!