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Playtime with the devil

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Sat, 12 Apr 2008 at 03:10pm

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An eternity of sick turmoil Where harlequins are cheap and spoilt Seductive notions whisper loud To steer her right- They do her proud. A spear is fired through her heart But falls to splinters- She's too sharp. All her thoughts are that of hate From playing devil's advocate A charismatic poisoned chalice Eyes blood red and full of malice She drowns in black seas, melts with pride If you dare; come, join her side.
One other likes this.
2008-04-12
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macca
2008-04-12
Oh yeah thanks aslidsiksoraksi I think I spelt that right then :/
aslidsiksoraksi
2008-04-12

not bad especially the bit about her being to sharp to be hurt by the spear. very nice. (here should be her in the last line)