My buddies
Wed, 6 Dec 2006 at 05:43am
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I wake up - what is going on - my brain dimly registers with this essential waking query?
I try to think about who I was and where I was going.
Then my sensory perception gives me on last dying signal and I realize that I am burning.
I wondered why I was so flammable.
Then my brain stopped functioning and I died.
As I float slowly away from my body a coolness comes over me and I see the other bunny underneath me.
That's what woke me up, I thought angrily, who would hit me with a burning bunny?
I pan around and my vision is suddenly blurred and obscured by the culprit rapidly throwing its agile, sinuous, taught muscular body onto us both.
The desert fills with the bitter scent of burning rabbit fur.
The smoke ascends from the flame.
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2006-12-06
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razzle_bedazzlez
2006-12-12
i like it, it's really descriptive and stuff.
