Dull
Mon, 18 Sep 2006 at 04:07pm
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The tires gripped the wet road, smashing their way through the pools of dirt and oil infused rain. I leaned against the tower of concrete with one leg crooked. Hands in the deep pockets of my damp coat, I contemplated. The rain hitting the floor made a background hum, releasing the pressure on the outside of my head. Light fell downwards through the thick clouds, devoid of potency, leaving a dark grey purely ambient world, which eased my eyes. The water seeped through my shoulders and into my chest, soaking into my soul; leaving me with a feeling of utter calm.
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Mmmm. "Devoid of potency" was one of those phrases that just makes me shudder. In a good way.
Very nice.
Can I use this in an upcoming presentation I have on antecedent problems? I need something short and desc<x>riptive with pronouns.