1223
Mon, 21 Jan 2008 at 05:24pm
Lying on park benches
watching the sidewalk
I listen to
slow songs
soft songs
drifting trees
I had arrived with
a design
that I can't seem
to find
anymore.
And furthermore,
I've come to regard
that
Sometimes, the sound of kites won't calm me
But I'll find convenience in the wind.
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1235
Fri, 1 Feb 2008 at 12:37pm
Maybe someday,
I'll end up as
one of those
miracle cases.
You know,
those guys that
end up as
Salvations.
But at the time,
I'm trying to find
the dust.
Three others like this.
1241
Sun, 3 Feb 2008 at 10:56am
I fell asleep.
the scent of a Fraxinus
opened my thoughts
enabling me to dream.
and as I lay there
my nature
happened upon
documents,
laws,
and regulations:
suppressing my
leisurely pursuit
I want to burn that fucking tree.
Two others like this.
1243
Mon, 4 Feb 2008 at 02:19pm
This is a message for the air:
the government took me away.
they found her
vase.
And I'm afraid of dying alone.
Four others like this.
I like this one. I would try to explain why, but it's late and I'm tired, so you'll just have to suffice with that.
+1!
I like the flow of this one more than your other ones. It's still pretty short and choppy(your style pretty much) but it's just got a better rythm to it. I like the "slow songs, soft songs..." part.