Dom and El
Dom and El 1; Welcome to the suck
"DAMN YOU ALL!
YOU CAPITALIST FUCKING FAT SHITHEADS!
HOW DARE YOU?
HOW THE FUCK DARE YOU?"
"hahaha will you listen to that fool" I snort into my milkshake. Across the grimy plastic of the Makkydees tabletop, Elsie gives me a look so old it was positively saurian.
"Shut up and drink your milk Dom, I'm sure the police will be here soon"
And they were, slamming through the heavy doors with riot battons out they clubbed the man to the ground, his blood seeping across the patterned linolium in a terribly cliche way...
"c'mon, lets go catch the early train home" sighs Elsie to the background cacophany of boot to groin combat. Reluctantly I agree, I had been hoping to prehaps go catch a short film at the local Odeon before leaving, but El was probably right, we needed to get some shut eye before work in a few hours time.
The walk to the train station was pretty uneventful. An ambulance crashed past us, en route to the Makkies probably. Seemed a bit of a waste to me, there were more needy people on this dank turd of an excuse for a street alone than the fool in the 'Donalds...
We boarded the train leaving for Stockton a few seconds before departure and took our seats near the front, in the 'elderly and disabled' reservation spot.
Screw what the oldies and spaks wanted, these were our damn seats now. Fuckers.
As El checked her watch for like the hundredth time I finaly lapsed out of consciousness, my head banged on the luminous yellow 'saftey' rail, making a resounding crack and causing my blood to start flowing freely...
As I blacked out I remember seeing El check her watch again, sighing, and carefully move her bag out of the way of my blood.
When I finaly regained consciousness I was still on the train, the blood had dried on the floor and seat and my scalp had one fat scab across it. El was nowhere to be seen. How long had I been out?
I managed to get up after a few false starts and made my way to the door which slid open with suprising ease.
Damn, looking around I was clearly at the end of the line, which meant a long walk back down the line to my stop.
Swearing I set off, carefull to keep away from the tracks incase of delayed trains coming along. After about four hours or so of trudging I got to my stop. Scrambling incompitantly up the rusted iron ladder bolted to the wall I made my way across the station and out into the polluted and noxious morning air.
I let myself into mine and El's appartment unit, flopped down on the bright orange '70s revival' sofa with pink polka dot pattern and stretched my legs out across the thick green carpet. Presently El arrived, she gave me a disproving look as she opened the door but said nothing. I knew nothing needed be said. I would receive my dismissal form from my company within one to three days for failing to attend work in concord with my contract, and would be rendered obsolete within two weeks if I failed to establish a new contract. Which was unlikely with a fucking great scar on my head.
"Piss" I said, dispassionately.
"Thats one way of saying it" Said El from the Kitchen cubicle, "Personaly I'd say; "twattery"
She came in with a pair of beers and handed one to me before going and sitting on the 'strawberry red ressurection era' pouffe by the TV.
"I'm gonna get some sleep, then I'll go find a new contract I suppose" I said, finishing my beer hurredly.
"I'll wake you in about two hours then" was the terse reply.
Damn she was angry with me...
"Thanks" I said as I stumbled to my room and fell into the warm embrace of a true deep-sleep.
I awoke to the sound of screaming.
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Wow..
Definitely weird. Interesting, though, at the very least. Some sort of future, or alternate present?, perhaps? A very strange and different value system these people have.
But I like it. If you can get some sort of plot going with this, I'd probably like it all the more. I'm curious as to how that'd come out.
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