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A Campaign of Hate

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Sat, 7 Oct 2006 at 11:44am

Shooting Bullets

You came just like every day. In your usual clothes. Black, that is the color that I know you like to wear. I asked myself once. You said it was sexy. You were right. But today was different. Today the black was tainted. You didn't wear sexy black clothes any more, because you had red on black. Liquid red blood is running down your clothes... This was what you had been saving up for. All the rage built up inside of you. Now it was exploding out. But you didn't want to die. You will run. You will live to kill anyone who tries to prevent you from living.

Now, in the wake of all the dead bodies; the live bodies, you walk with fury. Anyone that is a threat is eliminated. You kill the kid that tries to jump you. You kill the kid that tries to kill you. You lived and let live, but not anymore. Your next target is that boy that was always harassing you. You shoot him in the head. His brain promptly loses vital connections and dies - ceasing to command the utmost important function of the heart. He won't live from that. You move on, ignoring those in fear of you, heedless to the selectiveness of your slaughter. Those stupid ones - you will not kill them, they aren't worth it - they don't know what's going on.

As you exit... your trenchcoat is whipping chaotically in the wind of your haste, flicking specks of red around you. Amidst the blood a trail is left in your boot prints. You pick up the backpack, put the boots and coat into the car, and get in the drivers seat; putting the backpack in the passenger's seat. You close the door. The window comes down revealing your contorted and blood stained face, which emits a terrible tortured scream:

"FUCK YOU!"

You start the ignition, release the parking break and quickly drive away. The window goes up.

One other likes this.
2006-10-07
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nikeshlong
2006-10-08

im not sure if this is deliberate or not, but im not 100% as to what, or who this poem is exactly about, i think maybe thts a good fing

sold
2006-10-08
It is interesting that you should say that...