The Junkyard of Eden
A New Kind of Pain
Right, left, right, left, right, left, right, left. She imagined her feet as not being there, she was simply floating, rotating slightly side-to-side as a force propelled her body. She giggled at the thought of not having feet. How bizzare she thought. Right, left. Everyone has feet. No, she frowned, except the people without feet. She giggled again. The people without feet have no feet. Why don't they have any feet? They just don't have them. Maybe they were removed. Right, left, right left. Feet were so funny. She wondered what would it like to be all purple. Purple is nice, especially dark purple. Ha, ha. She smiled as she went. Right, left, right, left. Purple. Purple, purple, purple, purple, purple. Purple and maroon, purple and maroon, what a lovely thing to do as purple and maroon on the moon. Swaying gently. Right, left, right, left. Into the night, swaying. If she was all purple, she considered, that would be very interesting. If she was all black she wouldn't be able to be seen at night, though. Right, left, right, left. She fizzily gazed over all of the domain of feetsville. Yes, it had something to do with feet. She began to skip. Skip, skip, skip, now she was just bounding. Whew! That was too tiring. Where was she? Probably in the right place. Yes in the right place. She remembered to check the little paper. The little paper was very important, that's what they said. It looked just like the sign. What a colorful sign. Ha, ha. Right left, right, left. She continued on. She opened the door. She felt lovely. Superb, superlative, just super. Simply supreme. She began to lethargize slightly and went up the stairs, right, left, right, left. Up one onto the square. Up another. Right, left, right left. At last. This must be the door. What a great door it was. It smelled good. She opened it up. It wasn't the door, inside there were colours and flashing lights. What a grand experience! She gazed in awe. Someone tugged her inside and she willingly accepted to their touch. The noise was so... profound. Her whole thing was blowing up. She sat down to experience the wondrous... mmmmmmmmm.. someone touched her. She loved this. Now they were urging her, patting her on the back. She felt great. She decided to get up. She felt great. Right, left, right, left. The colours were fantastic. The sounds were magnificent. Oh, hummmmmmming, ooohhh... She took off her sandals and continued on. Right, left, right, left. Into the door. The noise was thumping. She walked over to the bed. She wanted to feel great. She wanted to lie down. Right, left, right, left, OUCH!! Suddenly her toe throbbed. She had hit the bed. She cried at the horrible pain. The terrible, woeful pain. She lay down. The warm bed was like a cloud, and suddenly the door opened and someone entered. The lights stopped her from crying and she looked up at the girl.
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Interesting. I'd usually criticise the lack of paragraphs but it goes with the feeling I got from the story, it works well. I'm not sure if this is a standalone, it's in a series so that suggests it isn't. But I'm curious as to what happens next.
Actually there was no context. It was supposed to be the longest story about someone stubbing their toe. But I never get around to writing until late... It was meant to be a standalone; but you've asked for it, and you'll get it. Although I think you would be mildly confused.
I enjoyed this a ton. Any longer, and it would have gotten on my nerves. Feet are indeed the most important body part, for without them, they would be gone.