Love
Sat, 18 Jun 2011 at 02:55am
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Love is so weak by its self. But join to unbearable people together and you can have the most unbelieveable experince ever. As they join into a slow but desirable kiss. They join together in spirt and mind. As things being to unfold. They come together. As they undress. Show bear skin. They wonder what waits them. As she moans from pleasure the man can no longer hold him self together. As he enters her their love combinds. He slowly moves in and out to be gently with her. They both feel so much pleasure. Soon they both climax and have the most pleasureable experince ever. As they both just made love not have sex but made love in their wishes.
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Beyond the shallow 'meaning' behind this piece, it is riddled with simple grammatical and spelling errors that I think are less like "errors" and more like "literary ignorance". If you can't maintain good quality in your own writing, I would suggest finding a proofreader.
So basically love is when two unbearable people get together and have sex? Oh wait, made love not have sex but made love.
In their wishes.
Correct me if I'm wrong.