galileo
Tue, 23 Mar 2010 at 08:29am
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Galileo, tell me-
did you have trouble sleeping?
throat burning, stomach churning,
racing thoughts and winded breathing.
did it hurt like hell
to think too hard
about the stars you studied?
would your ears ring on nights alone-
absorbing the melancholy that plagues the city.
would you feel the tug
of corrupted souls-
and would it strike you kind of
funny?
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The structure of this piece is really appealing- it contributes enormously to how the piece is read.
Very nice job.