Robert and The Science of Abstract Painting.
Thu, 15 Oct 2009 at 09:17pm
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I saw a girl with amber eyes,
A copper bangle on each wrist
This beggar dancing in my path
Did sell her soul to lore and myth
Such rapture could this gypsy stage!
Exploding dulcet promises
Her steadfast faith near eased my qualm
Perusing ancient hieroglyphs.
Her mantra read like prose,
I mused if this she freely chose
Her voice leapt such as fireworks might:
Fuchsia! Jade! Navajo white!
Against the teal of eve it cracked,
Her pyre fierce and I: polite
As battle fields adumbrate mines,
Her verse I almost did requite:-
‘Mind my act and hear my tongue.
These vibrant hooks will quench dry vines’
But, kindly I declined her truth
An empty truth. A peasant’s feast.
To you this truth I shan’t bequeath -
For those who tarry falter least.
And so I flew west -
Then forward for a thousand years
A thing of steel with laser eyes did talk,
But not of good or bad.
He told me that ‘To prophesise
Romantic thoughts make humans mad!’
He spoke only of facts and all
That held a mass,
Regardless of its state or class.
A talent (mind, a lonely bore.)
And Descartes truly thought us ill
For not defining sense as lies
Our world of dust is fiction
Divorcing hairs:
An ash of diction
For every thought, we’ll cry a name
But surely one would favour cries
Then one might diagnose their pain
With words
In place of homeless blame
Our nouns might court with grammar
And kiss
And sit upon a shelf
A marriage bound through stammers
So one can comprehend one’s self.
The battle ceasing to be won
I watch and wonder in despair
Each opponent obdurate:
The frugal and the chivalrous,
Neither satisfy my fate.
Still, they crusade : weak, forlorn-
To entertain they must debate.
This wisdom doesn’t bring me wealth
Nor verity. I live distraught!
Our means of being: stale mate.
Fearing all that we are taught.
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I'm caught between liking the rhyme and finding it distracting. It rarely came when I though it would. Your word choice is sublime though.