Thirteen Points if You Get All of Them (Re: Sunrise)
Thu, 26 Feb 2009 at 07:35am
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I see
A sunrise
A mountain of warmth and light
More beautiful than Cleo, Helen, and Monroe combined
A sense of life so near and clear and true
If thou canst rise, speak too
And it demands! that shadows be cast
Long and tall like a line to be walked
And risked and fought for; its mine, yours and ours
Once more unto the breach, it shouts, of the day
For all gold things pass’d and that shall pass
Catch it, for it runs and wanders forty years
And forty nights, through the heart of darkness
And savage children, runs through the middle of
Your house and the middle of your street
It repeats, idiosyncratic, like a breakbeat
Or the chequer’d eastern sky, unforgettable and invisible
And indivisible, oh-say-can-you-see derivable
Invincible, with ninety-nine problems but today ain’t one
Today won’t shunt this light sideways
Todays will always surround tonights
That hound you and found you tonight
Found you, cryin’ to little sisters and Antolinis
And Laurences, for love seemingly dead
And twilights definitely cold
Hang on, never let go, Jack, and
Rise with it, float on
Like hopes and eyes and hands
Seizing it by dawn.
This slowly, surely sunrise
Can you see it?
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Excellent work-it's got a really nice rhythm and flow throughout, and all the references made me smile. ;D
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