voice
Tue, 20 Jan 2009 at 07:20pm
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hesitation shouldn't be a function.
let your mind explode into conversations.
talk to me like you've just learned to talk, and don't stop,
because if you were to ever stop, you'd forget how to start again.
breathing should be a secondhand nature, it should hold no importance.
every word that escapes from your mouth should be so powerful,
that it allows you to breathe in unison.
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nomnomnom stream of consciousness. sexy. that first line deserves a good bit of contemplation, though I'm up in the air as to whether separating it from the rest of the poem as it is [adds to] or [detracts from] the point.
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