Feels Like Pain
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This place without you seems a place of nothing. When I really know that if I could just catch a glimpse of you, make sure you're still kickin', then it would be the best time of my life. As it is, I'm just content with the dealings of things here.
These people without you seem hollow, with no real personality. When I really know that if I could just hold your hand for a second, just feel you beside me, that these people would become some of the best I have ever met.
Everything without you feels like pain. I cannot see, hear, talk, without thinking of you. I am tired and shitty all of the time. I cannot seem to hold down a smile for more than a second, a good mood for more than a minute.
I cannot feel for other people the depth of which I feel for you. It is like compairing a puddle to the ocean. This being without you us killing me, tearing me from the inside out. How can one person, be the cause of so much pain? How did you get so far inside my heart?
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I hope you cheer up soon.. :(
This title is perfectly ironic for me, I have been in alot of pain today. I broke my collar bone badly. :(
I like your piece.
I like this except for the last line... it just doesn't flow or fit very well... make it a little more descriptive maybe...
don't worry though, life can suck sometimes but you can always bounce back from it... happens to me all the time...