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Dirty Scat

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Tue, 19 Aug 2008 at 07:32am

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Shooobly, do ma bop Boobity bop bop Diddly ma doo bop Diddly boobly, bop bop ba. Grindity ma shoobity bop. Fiddly with ma boobity bop. Doobity ma diddly bop. but please don't break my heart.
Five others like this.
2008-08-19
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 1 minus votes, 5 plus votes, and 0 astars.
kluny
2008-08-19
aw. so cute.
bobman12
2008-08-19
panzy
andrew-in-grace
2008-08-19
If only we could hear it being read out loud :). Or set to music.
radio___clash
2008-08-21

That's excedingly clever. It sort of demands to be read aloud, though, since reading it I didn't really catch on until the third line. Or maybe I'm just slow. Or maybe you're not supposed to catch on early? Whatever. It's cute.

aetherlightning
2008-08-25
sorry but this just annoys me... and doesn't work at all in text form... minused.
ernest
2008-08-26
obviously you're supposed to read it aloud.
2008-08-27
which I did... and a tried to sound like Louis Armstrong too while I did it... still seemed stupid to me... but obviously I'm just weird cause everyone else likes this
poison
2008-08-28

That's cool, everyone has their own tastes.

I was just... trying to go for a like "You can fuck me but don't fuck me over" kind of message in this piece. Ya know?

- Matt

2010-11-22

Words may never hurt you.

But to me they hurt a ton.

To me they feel like punches.

To you they sound like fun.

Words have never helped me.

They've only pushed me down.

Thats why whenever you saw me,

I was lying on the ground.

But some words can be nice!

Some can pick you back up.

Others have a price.

Thats why I say stop.

So even when i'm down,

and my hands turn into fists.

My friends always come around

to help me stop the madness.

:3 This is a poem I made and have been editing for the past 2 years! I dont have an account on here so just call me mcwollybob. lol.