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Mightmare

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Sat, 27 Sep 2008 at 02:44am

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When I looked in to her eyes I asked "What's wrong" She said: "The tears roll from my eyes Onto my cheeks then to the floor" Every time I asked she said it again "The tears roll from my eyes Onto my cheeks then to the floor" Until It became clear I asked Her "what have you done" She said: "I have sinned Now I am cursed to feel sorrow in my heart" I asked her "What was your sin" She said: "I grabbed a knife It was in my hands I watch him die" I asked her " What? Who was this" She didn't answer I asked her again "Who was this" She said "It was Daniel I Murdered him Now he is dead" I asked her "What are you talking about She said: "He's not alive any more Its my fault I killed him" I asked "What are you saying Daniel is alive" She said: "No he's not You were there He died in my arms" I asked her "What are you talking about" She said: "Don't you remember It was in the forest Why don't you remember" I told her "You need to get some help" She said: "No I don't need help I'm not crazy You just have to remember" I asked her "Why do you say that I need to remember" She said: "I say it because You have to Kill me to end every thing" I asked her " To end what?" She said: "To end My Horrible life" I asked her "Why would i want to do that" She said: "Because I killed the only person that I ever loved And he loved me back" I asked her "Then Why did you kill him" She said: "Because You told Me to"
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2008-07-02
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ronnoc-ekrub
2008-07-05
Dun dun duuuuuuuuh. I like it. :) I tis good. +1