Pompous Screaming Hearts
Sun, 29 Jun 2008 at 11:11pm
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You waited all night to brush my fierce lips
With your waist pressed against
The curve of my hip
As we fell to the floor
And the floor turned to sky
But a noise hit our lungs
And suddenly,
darkness.
Then our ears burnt
As our joints licked the fire
That the circus lit up
With a verse from the choir
Their singing;
A beat
Moved our curious feet
As we danced
Whilst they sang
Then applauded the band.
Did you know,
Did you know brushing my fierce lips
Would be quite like this?
One other likes this.
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2008-06-29
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kluny
2008-06-30
I like this
Mainly cause I've been there
Relatable and such
2008-07-26
i like the use of fierce.
very good.