carpet burn
Mon, 30 Jun 2008 at 05:50am
untitled
The scene was dim lighting
& white walls
Kids on couches &a roach burning out
in a stolen ashtray.
The hum of the ceiling fan
&a steady bass line
Sounds like the same song but the title keeps changing.
You think maybe you'll knock 'em over the head with the truth
but no one's listening
Four others like this.
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2008-06-30
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were:
0 minus votes,
3 plus votes, and
0 astars.
kluny
2008-07-01
This is very good, especially last lines.
bobman12
2008-07-01
Nothing bad about it at all.
+++++