i n F l e u  (it's beta!)

LOG  IN  OR  SIGN  UP



I didn't notice

1435
Mon, 9 Jun 2008 at 12:35am

untitled

I was wearing your green plaid shirt when it happened.

But I didn't notice.

Your aviator sunglasses, too.

But I didn't notice.

I was writing it all down in the leather-bound journal you bought me, with the pigment pen I took from your desk.

But I didn't notice. I didn't notice.

I was wearing your Led Zeppelin shirt when it happened again.

But I didn't notice.

Your silly ring, too.

But I didn't notice.

I was twisting it in all directions while you refused to look me in the eye. With a name like yours, I figured you might be a bit more admirable.

I was dressed in irony and I didn't even notice.

One other likes this.
2008-06-09
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 1 plus votes, and 0 astars.
macca
2008-06-10
This piece is.. interesting I like it a lot emily! ++++ for you