Birthday Gift
Mon, 9 Jun 2008 at 12:44pm
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I'm consumed by the fire we create,
Our feet ache and the evening's late.
Stars hide behind clouds that cover,
Youth could never stop these lovers.
When did a glance become a gaze?
The look not only stays
Within my mind,
But in my...
I could sleep forever by your side,
Your heartbeat as my lullaby.
Your breath a blanket from the chill,
Love unfold me if you will.
Your eyes are perfect shades of you.
Tell me who knew
How this became what
This became.
We feel like we just ran a race
No sweatdrops falling from your face.
We're looking down from stories high,
With time and airplanes speeding by.
I know we know it's understood
What we have is good
Within my mind,
Within my...
6/4/08
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2008-06-09
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cyanide
2008-06-16
I love the entire second stanza. =)