Petals
Thu, 22 May 2008 at 08:38pm
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Buds awake.
A cicala lands,
Amongst a
Kind
Corolla's hand.
The eudicots,
Rich in bright petals.
Whisper pleas
To
Kiss soft nettles
She sat and smiled
For a thousand hours
Admiring each
Of
These fuchsia flowers.
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2008-05-22
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emilyexstacy
2008-05-22
I LOVE your pieces!
They're all so well expressed.
And this one made me smile.
+1
ronnoc-ekrub
2008-05-23
I love the rhyming scheme! And the poem is beautiful.
+1