Goodbye
Mon, 19 May 2008 at 01:24am
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Empty words spoken
by unfeeling lips
under a cold, shattered sky.
Empty promises broken
by an unbeating heart
mirrored in a tearless eye.
Empty dreams woken
by unsounding screams
no louder than a whispered sigh.
But full of meaning is this token
that I lay with you
as I say my last goodbye.
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2008-05-19
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-mc
2008-06-27
i like it a lot
