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poison

To Incandescence

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Mon, 12 May 2008 at 06:13am

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Do you remember That one time, we drank too much... Light, when I close my eyes, the room dims and eventually you're gone. But when I think of your voice I can see you sitting there, crying to the pumpkin.
Two others like this.
2008-05-12
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 2 plus votes, and 0 astars.
mikeec216
2008-05-12
Well I can tell it's about someone, but who is the question??
poison
2008-05-12

Well, part of it is about this girl I know, most of it is about me being crazy and talking to my glowy clock radio/alarm clock, and the pumpkin thing I don't know where I got that.

- Matt

mikeec216
2008-05-12
Mayhaps your alarm clock is shaped like a tiny pumpkin?
macca
2008-05-12
Does it like actually make sense?
macca
2008-05-12
I mean or is it just like randomness lol
poison
2008-05-12

It's mainly the subject reminiscing about moments with this girl. He remembers the night they got so drunk that she cried to the pumpkin.

- Matt

kluny
2008-05-16
that makes perfect sense. cool beans.
artful_dodge
2008-05-16

We need to establish a universal format for the number of blank lines you're supposed to leave in between stanzas and why.