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Tense.

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Sat, 10 May 2008 at 09:03pm

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She cried And she cried Until the Niagara Falls was jealous, tumbling its water upon the competitive rocks. She laughed And she laughed Until the mountains threw avalanches, cascading a rage of competitive snow. Then she ran She ran through the clogged air and filled her lungs with past as she searched for clear oxygen Searched for a future. After hours of laughing and crying and running she stopped. She waited. She turned around and saw the clear air She saw it “Sit back,” it said, “I‘ll let you be my everything.”
Two others like this.
2008-05-10
The commendations this piece recieved in IF1 were: 0 minus votes, 2 plus votes, and 0 astars.

I get a sense of myself, it evoked something that I think was needed to figure my current 'someone' situation

burning_sands
2008-05-22
for some reason this reminds me a lot of one of the (many) fantasy series i'm in the middle of atm